Cold air: dodoitsu (and others)
I made different forms on th esame subject. Thought it would be best to put them under the same title and thread. Cold airInvisible hands that pullat my hair and lick at myface as I foolishly tryto...
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These are all super but I really like "Cold Air" the best, it's such a lovely image! Nice job Leftfield I recently published four books throughiUniverse.com.You can purchase a copy of my books...
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Leftfield,Your dodoitsu was excellent. the images were amazing.. the metaphor for the wind was great! Loved your first try. I would like to see more. You haikus were equally wonderful!Hugs!...
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All are excellent LFbut I do fav. cold air most... A white flowergrows in quietnessLet your tonguebecome that flowerVisit Friendly Musings
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I think this would work very nicely if you took the comments out and put the three together. A single poem made from three, giving tribute to a cooling planet. Great.Gaer
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Thank you very much for your kind comments. I'll need to keep writing more poetry with forms to it. It's really fun. My anthology of poems published through www.lulu.comThe best and most beautiful...
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